Reviews: Red and black Roses

for Red and black Roses

4/17/2006 c1 GigiTheMagnificent
I like the idea of your poem, it's really beautiful, but could you refine it? It's very elegant and sweet it's just lacking...passion.

7/12/2005 c1 nanashi-reikon
nice! :). even tho i hav no idea who ur writing about (srry to b so blunt) i like the way you write. so simple and mysterious. a lot better than what i've read recently. keep it up!

6/22/2005 c1 1team wolf II
interesting poem, continue please

6/9/2005 c1 8aaa68
that was cool see yha later e mail me to show how this works