8/6/2020 c14 2Iara Raven
I loved this story a lot
it was heart-wrenching tbh
especially their good bye
I loved this story a lot
it was heart-wrenching tbh
especially their good bye
5/12/2020 c14 girlscanbealphas
I love it. Although I am said that my bbrae didn't fully make it in this story I'm excited to read the sequel.
I love it. Although I am said that my bbrae didn't fully make it in this story I'm excited to read the sequel.
4/22/2020 c1 6LilyTimbers
So I initially started this fic a couple of months ago, but I stopped reading it around Chapter 3 because I thought it would be your typical high school AU, and I wasn’t really feeling it.
However, I am SO glad I came to finish reading it, because it really subverted those expectations!
My favourite things: 1) the characterization. Everyone was very in character. I particularly liked your interpretation of Kory. 2) the dialogue. Sometimes, it was a little exposition-heavy (mostly near the beginning, which is understandable) but for the most part, it was really natural. 3) the incorporation of the source material into the AU setting. All of your references were recognizable but subtle, making it an overall enjoyable read. AUs sometimes go a little too obvious in trying to make references, to the point where it doesn’t really work for the “real world”. But you pulled it off well!
I’m really looking forward to reading the sequelthanks for writing this!
So I initially started this fic a couple of months ago, but I stopped reading it around Chapter 3 because I thought it would be your typical high school AU, and I wasn’t really feeling it.
However, I am SO glad I came to finish reading it, because it really subverted those expectations!
My favourite things: 1) the characterization. Everyone was very in character. I particularly liked your interpretation of Kory. 2) the dialogue. Sometimes, it was a little exposition-heavy (mostly near the beginning, which is understandable) but for the most part, it was really natural. 3) the incorporation of the source material into the AU setting. All of your references were recognizable but subtle, making it an overall enjoyable read. AUs sometimes go a little too obvious in trying to make references, to the point where it doesn’t really work for the “real world”. But you pulled it off well!
I’m really looking forward to reading the sequelthanks for writing this!
10/19/2019 c14 The Darkest Of Blues
Wow. I was wondering how such a complex story concept could be wrapped up in 14 chapters, and I'm happy to see it hasn't been, and that you are doing a sequel! I really like the idea of making Gar a K9 officer, it's really original and fitting to his personality. Can't wait to read the next one!
Wow. I was wondering how such a complex story concept could be wrapped up in 14 chapters, and I'm happy to see it hasn't been, and that you are doing a sequel! I really like the idea of making Gar a K9 officer, it's really original and fitting to his personality. Can't wait to read the next one!
8/8/2019 c14 AleBrehm
I don't know what would you think of it, but I like the idea of one specific word, used in the previous chapter for the sequel's title: hope. Loved the story and I'm eager to read more.
I don't know what would you think of it, but I like the idea of one specific word, used in the previous chapter for the sequel's title: hope. Loved the story and I'm eager to read more.
2/19/2019 c14 LowkeyLowC
I appreciate your effort towards authenticity and realism in your works take as much time as you need to write your story
I appreciate your effort towards authenticity and realism in your works take as much time as you need to write your story
2/19/2019 c14 Miss geek
Wooow I love it it’s so different keep that idea with gar and Richard working together it would be interesting if victor would be the engineer that makes the polices weapons and machinery maybe. For kori I’m not sure people always make her a model but maybe go a different route like a language translator if ur going to go with the theme of they all work together in the same place. If not she could be a teacher , journalist or completely different fashion designer CEO or whatever you like lol there are some ideas hope they help some what. Not sure if u would want her to be with Richard maybe they split up or not there could a story line about that I’m really just bouncing ideas in my head hope u update soon
Wooow I love it it’s so different keep that idea with gar and Richard working together it would be interesting if victor would be the engineer that makes the polices weapons and machinery maybe. For kori I’m not sure people always make her a model but maybe go a different route like a language translator if ur going to go with the theme of they all work together in the same place. If not she could be a teacher , journalist or completely different fashion designer CEO or whatever you like lol there are some ideas hope they help some what. Not sure if u would want her to be with Richard maybe they split up or not there could a story line about that I’m really just bouncing ideas in my head hope u update soon
2/14/2019 c10 lopezalice
really good chapter! thanks for the update. hope you’ll continue with this fic! I’m really excited to see what will happen next
really good chapter! thanks for the update. hope you’ll continue with this fic! I’m really excited to see what will happen next
2/13/2019 c13 2Azarath Cat
Oh. My. Gosh. This is fantastic! I love a good AU and you have most definitely done this ship justice! Can't wait for the sequel!
Oh. My. Gosh. This is fantastic! I love a good AU and you have most definitely done this ship justice! Can't wait for the sequel!
2/11/2019 c13 Guest
Please, please, please get the sequel up soon.
Please, please, please get the sequel up soon.
2/11/2019 c13 28WeasleyIsMyKing540
Awh this broke my heart!
I cant wait for the sequel.
You wrote this story beautifully and I cant wait to see the next episode.
You've gained a loyal reader :)
Awh this broke my heart!
I cant wait for the sequel.
You wrote this story beautifully and I cant wait to see the next episode.
You've gained a loyal reader :)